2022 Poetry Postcard Fest, ekphrastic, poetry, troiku

POPO2022 day 10 — sun in space

Posted by Lisa or Li on

card 10 sun in space resized

her fire mane flutters
serene orbital bubble
within all’s chaos

her fire mane flutters
innerplanetary flags
claim peace’ sovereignty

orbital bubble
captures weary travelers
gravity’s respite

within all’s chaos
we dwell in the center of
her almond-eyed bliss

13 Comments

  1. Christian's Music Musings's avatar christiansmusicmusings says:
    October 10, 2022 at 11:55 am

    Reminds me of Canadian “mystery band” Klaatu” and their 1976 album “3:47 EST”, or were they The Beatles after all? :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 10, 2022 at 12:32 pm

      OK now you’ve got me wondering. Are you going to write a post on it? Or have you already written one on it??

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      1. Christian's Music Musings's avatar christiansmusicmusings says:
        October 10, 2022 at 12:36 pm

        Funny you should ask! :-)

        https://christiansmusicmusings.wordpress.com/2022/02/17/introducing-from-the-vault/

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
          October 10, 2022 at 1:04 pm

          Thanks for the link :) I just browsed the text and sampled the songs and made a comment at your post.

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  2. Sadje/ Sadie's avatar Sadje says:
    October 10, 2022 at 12:06 pm

    Beautiful poem

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 10, 2022 at 12:32 pm

      Thank you!

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      1. Sadje/ Sadie's avatar Sadje says:
        October 10, 2022 at 12:45 pm

        You’re welcome 😇

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  3. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:
    October 10, 2022 at 9:12 pm

    An orbital bubble sounds good to me. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 10, 2022 at 9:40 pm

      Thank you, K.

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  4. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:
    October 12, 2022 at 9:13 am

    Christian is right…the pic does remind me of Klaatu…Lord help us all lol.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 12, 2022 at 5:26 pm

      I didn’t see Christian’s comment, but does it look like an album cover of theirs?? lol

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:
        October 12, 2022 at 8:20 pm

        Yes their first album. People REALLY believed it was the Beatles in disguise! They were actually a pretty good band but when they were found out…they sunk. I seriously doubt if the Beatles would ever have a song called Anus of Uranus lol.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
          October 12, 2022 at 9:47 pm

          LMAO

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