PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
It started with doodling on a long phone conversation. My mind was focused, but my hand took a journey on the paper. It began looping lines, first one color and then another. A form began to take shape. Then something strange happened. Just my finger started drawing white lines on the page! It looked like a playground now. Thumb and finger pushed away from each other and the page grew larger. My hand threw the page on the floor. The image was 3-D and growing. My foot joined in, tapping, until the watery mirror materialized. Both hands pulled me in.
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Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the talecrafting host of Friday Fictioneers.
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Ooh, nice spooky story!
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Thanks, Paula!
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Sounds a bit like it could be an episode of the Twilight Zone!
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Now that you mention it….
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Very engaging story Li.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😇
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Seasonally magical
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Much thanks, Neil!
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This felt like a gently story with a spooky ending of being consumed in our own doodles and thoughts. Great escapism.
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James, great take on the story. Much appreciated. Thank you.
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That’s quite the gift. I wonder where the protagonist will end up?
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Good question!
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The magic of art! (K)
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Yes! Thank you, K.
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Blimey, that took a turn I wasn’t expecting! Well done.
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Thank you, Iain 🙂
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I thought about using that reflective puddle, but couldn’t come up with an idea. Yours? is wonderful!
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Linda, I wondered if I let my “hand” run with it where it would lead. Thank you ❤
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Your hand definitely took over – in a very good way. Well done.
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Thank you, Alicia!
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What a strange world it is! Unique and nicely done!
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Thank you, CG!
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This reminds me of Simon In The Land Of Chalk Drawings
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Yes!
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… and then she woke up. dream over. 🙂
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May be! 🙂
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The doodle that took on a life of its own. A fun story, Lisa.
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Thanks, Bill!
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I love the turn your story took until the doodling pulled her into the drawing. Mary Poppins-esq with a sinister twist. Nicely done!
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Thank you, Brenda!
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Oooooooo I love this. So clever and very spooky!
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Thanks, Laurie! Maybe that’s where your critters came out of? 😉
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Hahaha maybe!
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Dear Lisa,
As a visual artist I find your piece more than a little disturbing. 😉 Imaginative and fun.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, just don’t draw and playgrounds with puddles and you should be fine 😉 Thank you ❤
Shalom,
Lisa
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Dick Van Dyke, eat your heart out! Lovely idea 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Lovely story!
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Thank you, Neel!
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Ooh. Ours are similar. Yours is more sinister though. It reminds me of that video. What was it? “Take me on. Take on me.” Where the guy gets pulled into the drawing world in the cooler section of the grocery store. Anyway, good story.
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Ooh yes, it gets a bit tense in that video. Thanks, Nobbin.
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Ohhh wow! Love this! It’s spooky, creating your own world with doodles, then being sucked in. Very clever 🙂
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Thanks much, Fleur 🙂
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