dVerse — MTB — Mid-Season Splendor

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Juiceless lemons see-saw the sky
Autumn fruits reigning down
Bright flattened squash
Light figgy bosh
Autumn fruits reigning down

Yet green grows grass, persistent clown
Dichotomy that’s posh
As trees grow bare
Lawn takes the share
Dichotomy that’s posh

Seasons tease many-hued montage
Summer, fall, here and there
Coin toss descry
Moment’s reply
Summer, fall here and there

Which one it is, I do not care
A pleasant reverie
Caught in profound
Nature’s salon
A pleasant reverie

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Laura, I loved this form and will be using it again.

Laura is today’s host for dVerse’ Meeting the Bar. Laura says:
You can write on any topic but you might like to stick to the roundabout [form] and its associations…

29 Comments Add yours

  1. hey you mastered it! Loved all the fruity colours falling in the Fall

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Laura. I enjoy the challenges with the forms and each time I write a new form it feels like an accomplishment.

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      1. I think this one is definitely in the Intermediate challenge range!

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  2. rothpoetry says:

    You did a beautiful poem for Fall, Lisa. I love it.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Dwight, thank you very much. It was a toughie but in the end it reflects my thoughts on it.

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      1. rothpoetry says:

        You did very well!

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  3. memadtwo says:

    Like a circle dance. (K)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you 🙂

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  4. dorahak says:

    Amazingly executed, Lisa! And with all those big words too. 😉🧡

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Dora. The words I had trouble with were finding one-syllable words for the colors I wanted 🙂

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  5. a beautiful ode to fall Lisa and nailed the prompt! Nice! ❣️

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Cindy, thanks much ❤

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      1. You’re so welcome Lisa❣️

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  6. Lona Gynt says:

    you are always bringing us into your yard it seems, and what a wonderful place to be brought 🙂
    Much loves.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Lona, thank you! It’s my favorite place to be.

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  7. Lona Gynt says:

    And Garden 😉

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  8. Gillena Cox says:

    Nice one. I too feel that this was a difficult challenge.

    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Much❤love

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    1. msjadeli says:

      You’re very welcome, Gillena.

      Like

  9. Sadje says:

    Beautiful poem Li.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  10. kim881 says:

    It looks like you had a lot of fun with this one, Lisa, especially with the rhyming in the first stanza!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Kim. I’d like to revisit this one later and polish it some more.

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  11. Indeed… the passing season has pushed us to the fruits on the ground…

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Bjorn.

      Like

  12. Badfinger (Max) says:

    This one is different…I like the word play

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Max. That was a tricky form.

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  13. You had me at that first line!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      So pleased to hear it, Sara ❤

      Like

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