Juiceless lemons see-saw the sky
Autumn fruits reigning down
Bright flattened squash
Light figgy bosh
Autumn fruits reigning down
Yet green grows grass, persistent clown
Dichotomy that’s posh
As trees grow bare
Lawn takes the share
Dichotomy that’s posh
Seasons tease many-hued montage
Summer, fall, here and there
Coin toss descry
Moment’s reply
Summer, fall here and there
Which one it is, I do not care
A pleasant reverie
Caught in profound
Nature’s salon
A pleasant reverie
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Laura, I loved this form and will be using it again.
Laura is today’s host for dVerse’ Meeting the Bar. Laura says:
You can write on any topic but you might like to stick to the roundabout [form] and its associations…
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hey you mastered it! Loved all the fruity colours falling in the Fall
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Thank you, Laura. I enjoy the challenges with the forms and each time I write a new form it feels like an accomplishment.
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I think this one is definitely in the Intermediate challenge range!
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You did a beautiful poem for Fall, Lisa. I love it.
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Dwight, thank you very much. It was a toughie but in the end it reflects my thoughts on it.
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You did very well!
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Like a circle dance. (K)
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Thank you :)
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Amazingly executed, Lisa! And with all those big words too. 😉🧡
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Thank you, Dora. The words I had trouble with were finding one-syllable words for the colors I wanted :)
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a beautiful ode to fall Lisa and nailed the prompt! Nice! ❣️
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Cindy, thanks much <3
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You’re so welcome Lisa❣️
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you are always bringing us into your yard it seems, and what a wonderful place to be brought :)
Much loves.
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Lona, thank you! It’s my favorite place to be.
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And Garden ;)
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Nice one. I too feel that this was a difficult challenge.
Thanks for dropping by my blog
Much❤love
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You’re very welcome, Gillena.
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Beautiful poem Li.
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Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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It looks like you had a lot of fun with this one, Lisa, especially with the rhyming in the first stanza!
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Thanks, Kim. I’d like to revisit this one later and polish it some more.
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Indeed… the passing season has pushed us to the fruits on the ground…
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Thank you, Bjorn.
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This one is different…I like the word play
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Thank you, Max. That was a tricky form.
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You had me at that first line!
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So pleased to hear it, Sara <3
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