TSM 238 — Short Time*


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Marco had dreamed so long of a time when he could hold peace close to his heart. And now, here she was, resting with him, warm and downy, with no urge to fly. He sat with her in the sun, reveling at the quiet, healing power of her presence. He closed his eyes and breathed deeply. Time stood still.

GET BACK TO WORK!” screamed the boss.

He watched her fly. She carried his prayer with her. He knew that she would visit him again soon, as his time on earth in his present life was growing short.

 

*Short time is a term that soldiers use as their service term gets short.

Carrie is the host of The Sunday Muse.

 

 

36 Comments Add yours

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Randy :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje :)

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome my friend

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  1. kaykuala's avatar kaykuala says:

    He watched her fly.
    She carried his prayer with her.

    One gets the feeling that the bird carries the blessings above after being cupped lovingly with a pair of good hands. Very touching Lisa!

    Hank

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you so much, Hank. I like how you see it.

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  2. Rob Kistner's avatar Rob Kistner says:

    Sad and moving piece Lisa -+ tender… 🙂✌🏼🕊❤️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Rob <3

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  3. “tender” is exactly the right word, Lisa… I agree with Rob!

    So well written.

    <3
    David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, David :)

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  4. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    very moving Lisa <3

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, AJ.

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  5. qbit's avatar qbit says:

    Can we have doves like service dogs?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Christian!

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  6. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Poignant and deep. (K)

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  7. wyndolynne's avatar wyndolynne says:

    I had a catch in my breath at the end, the shifts were felt.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Wyndolynne!

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  8. Sherry Marr's avatar Sherry Marr says:

    I love that she carried his prayer with her.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Sherry, I do also.

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  9. Susie Clevenger's avatar Susie Clevenger says:

    So Beautiful

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Susie <3

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  10. Carrie V. H.'s avatar Carrie V. H. says:

    This is beautiful and touching Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you so much, Carrie.

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  11. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

    A lovely moment you describe here, Lisa. I love how he sent a prayer with her.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sunra, thank you very much.

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  12. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Peace will never stay close long on this earth.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Max, I’m glad you got what I was getting at. Maybe the old man will have to go to it…

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

        Yea I thought that off the bat with that one.

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  13. This is a warm, loving poem, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sara, thank you <3

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  14. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    Reminds me of the song, “On the wings of a snow white dove”.
    Nice write too, short.
    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I know that song and am glad you were reminded of it.

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