Triptyque: Soleil / Lune / Terre by Rosalinda Alvarez
sun
distant being propels fright’ning
umbra whit’ning
thissing, thatting
tai qi singing
moon
little cousin orbits, dreamspars,
envies solstar
begs for lightcrumbs
physics grace comes
earth
tiny bubble at the whim of
maths and godlove
bounces lyrics
song’s mysterics
Laura is today’s host of dVerse’ Meet the Bar. Laura says:
And so for today’s MTB prompt you should choose ONE of these threesomes:
• Sun; moon, earth
• Godhead Trinity/God/Father, Jesus/Son, Holy Spirit
• Yin, yang, oneness
We are writing without any set rule for rhyme or meter:
— A poem with THREE separate and distinct stanzas
— Each stanza numbered or subtitled with the reference word
— Include the reference word within the stanza if not subtitled
Tao Talk 
Mind blown.
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Thanks much, Ron.
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OMG! This is awesome and Verse 3 is my favourite
Much💜love
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🙂 Gillena, thanks very much.
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Exceptional! Perfectly matched by the triptych art.
I LOVE “mysterics” – and the marble marvel’s music x Thank you!
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Kathy, so happy you enjoyed the post 🙂
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this is great Li! I love it! ❤
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Thank you. Thank Laura also for the creative prompt.
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Nicely done, Lisa.
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Thanks much, Dwight 🙂
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you are welcome.
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At the whim of maths…aren’t we all. I love the way this dances. (K)
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Thanks, K ❤
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The clip of that marble machine is just incredible. I like your poem as well! 🙂
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Thanks, Christian! The marble machine is a labor of love and a symbol of creativity just like the cosmos is.
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Well done Lisa – the essence of all three distilled into a divinely pouring form.
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Wow! I’m happy it pleases you.
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what a delightful rhyming Syszgy
” tiny bubble at the whim of
maths and godlove”
I shall always think of earth as such from now on
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❤
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This definitely has a dance beat to it!
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Imagining Eminem rapping it and then adding some more to it… Thanks, Jane!
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xxx
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A bouncy triptych. I particularly like the final stanza.
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Thanks, Merril!
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You’re welcome!
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Great this is crying to be spoken aloud 🙂
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Maybe at the next OLN 🙂
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Yes go for it!
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This is so potent and so captivating Lisa! Excellent piece my friend.
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Thank you very much, Rob ❤
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My favorite will generally be the Moon, it makes my fangs come out, makes me howl, and sometimes makes me bite ladies on their necks. I like it being the orbiting little cousin of the sun.
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Ooh, lunacy can be fun the way you do it.
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🤯 this was so clever, so creative, short and sweet too!!
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Jay, thank you!
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I think it all ends with the earth where we belong after all.
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I like the happy face in the image. 😊
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Thanks, Gia!
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I so love what you have done here, Li! Marvellous! ❤️
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Thanks, Punam!
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My pleasure.
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