dVerse Poetics and Tanka Tuesday 311 — Variegated

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‘OSTARA – Spring Equinox’ is a painting by Annie Louvaine

Celebrating the Spring Equinox festival on the Pagan wheel of the Year. Represented by the Goddess Ostara her story goes that she found a frozen bird, she brought it back to life by transforming the dead bird into a Hare. each year the Hare lays coloured eggs for the Goddess in gratitude for her kindness. These symbols of course represent the rebirth and transformational forces of nature that are occurring at this time of year.  — Annie Louvaine

 

vernal equinox approach
winter, weary, drains account
duet, two seasons knitted
from the deep a virid fount

snow crust mantle gurgles slush
squirrels wake, tree nest peering
from the deep a virid fount
duet, two seasons knitted

when robin wings furl, hungry
worms are sleeping, not about
duet, two seasons knitted
from the deep a virid fount

when Persephone returns,
crocus, snowdrops sprout, gifted
from the deep, a virid fount
duet, two seasons knitted

 

The Mirrored Refrain is rhyming verse form constructed by Stephanie Repnyek.

Ingrid is today’s host of dVerse’ Poetics. Ingrid says:
I urge you to write the poetry of the places and/or spaces which inspire you the most.

The time of seasonal change remains one of the most inspirational for me. How it happens gradually is a gentle reminder for patience in all things.

Colleen Chesebro is the host of Tanka Tuesday. Colleen says use synonyms only of these two words:            

spring & green

 

53 Comments Add yours

  1. Oh my gosh, Lisa… I love this so much! You know these Pagan things speak to me. What a beautiful image and story. Your poem deserves to be framed! 🙏🏻💚

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Colleen, thank you for your glowing words and so happy it speaks to you.

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      1. This was beautiful and a delightful read. 💚

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  2. I love how spring light is coming back. Yesterday we were out skiing, today it has melted away.

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  3. Ingrid's avatar Ingrid says:

    I love the mirroring effect of the form you have chosen, Lisa: like shimmering water! :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) I like what you see, Ingrid. Thank you.

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  4. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    This is wonderful Jade. You know I love the knitting reference. But everything flows together so well. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Kerfe. I wanted to make it longer but time said otherwise.

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  5. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi says:

    This is incredibly deep and profound, Lisa! A lovely response to the prompt 😍😍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sanaa, thank you very much. Happy you connected with it.

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  6. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    I cannot wait for spring to finally arrive. Love this part:
    duet, two seasons knitted

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Grace. We woke up to another 6″ last night! That’s two nights in a row. Cmon now :(

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  7. D.L. Finn, Author's avatar D.L. Finn, Author says:

    This is beautiful and I can’t wait for nature to wake up.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I hear you, D.L.!

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  8. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    I’d love to see the golden eggs here. Lovely.
    Oh yes, we have spring for sure by February 15 here in Texas.
    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Quit bragging, Jim! :)

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  9. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    An interesting post. I always wondered how Easter Bunnies and Easter Eggs fit together. Perhaps you have solved this one. Well done!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Haha Dwight, I guess so! Thank you.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        you are welcome.

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  10. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    This is a beautiful poem Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  11. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Enjoyed this form. Its new to me. Lovely verses to your Spring.
    Thanks for droppinv by my blog.

    Much💜love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Gillena!

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  12. M Jay Dixit's avatar M Jay Dixit says:

    The flow in your beautiful poem is so perfect, Lisa. Spring is like that, one day it’s there then it’s gone and then it’s there again! Lovely🙂

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      So happy you enjoyed the poem, Jay. Thanks! :)

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  13. Beautifully knitted, Li! ❤️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Punam!

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  14. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen says:

    The painting ~ your poetry ~ how incredibly lovely.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      So happy you enjoyed them, Helen <3

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  15. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    This beautifully represents this time of year. Just lovely!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dale thank you very much. I like how this one turned out.

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        With good reason!

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  16. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    What a beautiful poem for this time of year Lisa 💐

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, AJ!

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  17. Luanne's avatar Luanne says:

    Really lovely!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Luanne :)

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      1. Luanne's avatar Luanne says:

        You’re welcome!

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  18. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    I never heard of the Goddess Ostara and her story – so thank you. Yet, another Pagan tradition borrowed by and transformed for another spring holiday to appease the masses.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Indeed, Jules!

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        Would it be that we could just teach kindness for all… without the expectations or fears associated with some ‘traditions’.

        While searching for the ‘why’… the only thing I came up with was an Othodox version of ‘red’ for blood. No mention of ‘borrowing’ colored eggs from the Goddess. So I’m going to guess the general public (besides not caring at this point) don’t know the truth. But then most believe a spring birth date should be clelebrated in winter… but that is another story…or miss-story.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Thanks for looking for answers. YMMV.

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          1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

            There might be others if one looked deeper. But some wouldn’t want to know them anyway… – their loss.

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          2. Jules's avatar Jules says:

            Oh… the first time I saw a show that showed ancient Greek Priests use the very first vending machine to dispence holy water… and also basically starve and then give drugged drinks to folks seeking mystic answers (so they wouldn’t see the strings holding up the fake angels from cave ceilings or notice the holes where the priets alter voices came from… well that was just very discouraging.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              :( Seeing the man behind the curtain takes all of the magic out and replaces it with … evil, in this case!

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              1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

                People make rules. Some people anyway.
                Some rules can be good; like don’t play in the street. But others that promote unkindness – they are the seeds of greed, which never really satisfies.

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  19. judeitakali's avatar judeitakali says:

    marvellous. love it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Jude!

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  20. This was a beautiful poem, Lisa!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Yvette :)

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