“Eternal Dance,” by geckobird
I’ll admit to you, but to deny to all others
my immortal pledge, my plum juicy love
the sugar for my tea, crumpet joy of union
as incarnations spin, seems dizzy curse
through beings, puzzling karmic inequity
as we swirl, flawed, an unsolvable jigsaw;
at every chance meeting, while aeons flux
our spring blooms will dance, hope pass
Laura is today’s host for dVerse’ Meet the Bar/Form.
I chose the contrapuntal with admit – deny.
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What a slickly executed contrapuntal, Lisa! I love the foody phrases ‘plum juicy love and ‘crumpet joy of union’ – did you know that, in the UK, a bit of crumpet is slang for a sexually desirable woman?
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Kim, thanks! No I did not know that about crumpet lol, but it seems to fit :)
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I too picked up on the delicious innuendos but then it is Spring! and I love the tight dialogue between your two poems Lisa
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Laura, thanks much.
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I love all the fun word play–and yes, as Laura wrote, “delicious innuendos.” 🙂
Delightful, Lisa!
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Thank you, Merril :)
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You’re welcome!
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I like the food references too. It’s all puzzling, all of it. (K)
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:)
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I knew the crumpet reference 😊
Interesting cleave
Much💜love
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Thanks much, Gillena :)
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Very well written my friend.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje <3
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Most welcome
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Wow, so this is two poems combined in one? Once again, I’m amazed how you come up with these things! :-)
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I follow good prompts and magic happens. Thank you, Christian :)
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It surely oftentimes looks like magic to me!
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:)
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Nicely done, Lisa.
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Thank you, Dwight.
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You are welcome!
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Deliciously created and full of beautiful flow. Love It.
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Paul, thanks much. Laura’s prompt gave it a good start.
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Wow! So nicely done, Lisa. From the title to the ending line(s), a masterpiece!
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Jay, very happy you like how it turned out. Thank you so much.
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This is delightful! I read it the three ways and I like the joined one best.
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Dale so happy you enjoyed the poem. It was an enriching experience to write it.
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I don’t doubt it. I have attempted the form but once!
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Are you going to write to this one??
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Nope!
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:( pretty please?
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Haha! I think not. I’m working on my ice storm post :)
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:)
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What a deliciously delightful write, Li! Tightly woven and it worked beautifully. ❤️
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Punam, your appreciation makes me happy. Thank you <3
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My pleasure. ❤️
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Great fun with words and lovely poem Lisa! ❣️
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Thanks much, Cindy!
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You’re so welcome Lisa!💕
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This one is very interesting…I like how it is set up
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It was a satisfying challenge to write. Thank you again, Max.
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