dVerse — Q203 — Amanita Dream

Amanita

Amanita Dream

Figment is as figment does.
So what does a figment do?
It’s nil to you as first it dreams
to fit inside haiku. Then it seems
its vapor grows until it fills a room.
So pungent as you breathe it in
this mind-bending mushroom.

top image:  “Amanita Mushrooms,” by Christine Marshall

Lillian is today’s host for dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. Lillian wants us to write a quadrille form poem (44 words total, not including title) using the word figment.

54 Comments Add yours

  1. lillian's avatar lillian says:

    You had me with the first line!

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      1. lillian's avatar lillian says:

        Hah! And I should have commented on the mind-bending mushroom —– a shroom to vroom you away until you see figments everywhere — and maybe the purple dragon kind! :)

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          shroom to vroom lol

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  2. A magic mushroom bends your mind
    but, beware it also turns you blind.

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  3. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi says:

    And so the magic mushroom leads to delightful figments! Love this :D

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thanks, Sanaa!

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  4. Ha! Great tone, and mulling…..full of jest and truth.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Ain. Did you see where I asked how do readers make comments on your poems? Inquiring minds want to know :)

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      1. Sorry about that, am correcting by moving blog.

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  5. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Love the rhythmic flow to this, Lisa!

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  6. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

    Love the rhythmic flow to this, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Dora!

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      1. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

        My pleasure!.

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  7. rog's avatar rog says:

    oh what a fun guy. he didn’t leave mush room inside.

    sorry about the puns

    ggreat poem

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      lmao, Rog. spore like your comment :)

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  8. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    haha – watch those mushrooms as you never where your mind might travel. Clever..

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    1. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

      Anonymous is Truedessa – not sure what happened here.

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Truedessa, thanks. Never tried them but I am tempted to from time to time. What you said is why I never decide yes :)

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  9. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 says:

    I enjoyed your quadrille!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, C4Y2!

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  10. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    A fantastic quadrille but i absolutely luv that opening line

    much🤍love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Gillena, thank you :)

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  11. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    I have heard shrooms will do that to you! A very creative poem Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dwight, glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

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  12. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    It dreams you…that’s exactly right. (K)

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  13. Rob Kistner's avatar Rob Kistner says:

    I love this Lisa… I went round and round with it… 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Goody! Was hoping it would bring light spirit in.

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  14. Cool, Lisa! 🍄‍🟫

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  15. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Now that is taking a word and running wild with it. Wonderful, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks so much, Dale :)

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  16. This was fun! I loved learning what figment does- it dreams to fit inside haiku! An expansive mind blowing quadrille.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      D, so glad you appreciate this poem.

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  17. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    Looks almost like the orange mushrooms of a fairy circle…don’t eat them- nasty stuff for sure!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jules they are well-known psychedelic mushrooms. No worries, not interested in taking that kind of trip.

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  18. I like the creativity in this poem. Nicely done.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Maria.

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  19. An enjoyable figment poem or hallucination…just have to make sure they’re the right magic mushies!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Di :)

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  20. shaun tenzenmen's avatar tenzenmen says:

    Nicely written and well rhymed!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Shaun.

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  21. Cris's avatar Cris says:

    This is so fun! Love it!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Cris, thank you :)

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  22. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    I could never have a dream about a mushroom. Yours sounds delicious.

    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It’s a pleasant fantasy, Jim. Thanks!

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  23. Great rhythm here in this nice, tight verse!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jennifer, thank you very much.

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  24. kittysverses's avatar kittysverses says:

    I enjoyed your catchy opening line, Li. Also great rhyme scheme. :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kitty, thanks much for reading and the feedback :)

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