Can you guess who I am?
Hints:
Matte, sparkled with prism upon flat or contoured
terrain; edged by windsways, pert chirps, your
grateful eyes under unshrouded bright.
Wavy, opaque cylinders drip away
gentle rhythm to my welcome
cameo that dispels
shivery moods
gloom flees
makes way
to feel, re-
embrace
hope.
Michelle Beauchamp, aka Mish, is today’s host of dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. Mish would like us to write a 44-word poem (minus title) using the word hint.
Tao Talk 
It all leads me beleive in icicles… wonderful
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:) believe!
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Nicely done, Lisa! I love the phrase ‘sparkled with prism’.
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Thanks, Kim!
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My pleasure, Lisa!
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Some very unique descriptions that I really enjoyed, especially “your
grateful eyes under unshrouded bright”. And then you made a quadrille icicle or icicle quadrille. Love it!
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Thanks much, Mish.
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I so adore the icicle shape of this poem, Lisa! 😍This part stood out to me; “cameo that dispels shivery moods/gloom flees/makes way to feel.” We can all use a bit of hope right now! 🩷🩷
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Sanaa thank so much. Yes, we can <3
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Ha! Well that was beautifully done! Loved it!
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:) Thanks, Ain!
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So clever to shape your poem as an icicle! What a great imagination you have!
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haha! Thanks!
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I smiled when I saw the title as that angle did occur to me. So glad you went there and your shape poem was a hint as to the answer.
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Truedessa, glad it made you smile :)
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The weather you captured in your clip looks nice but cold. The icicle shape of your poem is pretty neat! :-)
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Christian I was freezing my … icicles off standing out there with no coat. Thanks much :)
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Must be old man winter! Looks pretty cold up your way! Very creative.
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Dwight, I like your guess. It was “warm” today at 32 today. It was single digits at least a few days last week, with wind chill in minuses… Thank you :)
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You are welcome. On second thought, I believe it is an icicle!
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I thought the answer was the title of my video, but honestly any guess I’ve seen so far has been great.
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Ha ha… looks like I missed it again! :>)
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In this “contest” everyone is a winner <3
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Sounds good to me! :>)
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When I used to walk to school in winter, my friends and I were always looking for icicles. They never failed to charm. (K)
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I remember happy times of walking to school with friends. They’ve got some big’ns hanging near the libary entrance that always capture my attention.
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How beautifully clever, descriptive and like a momentary jewel, Lovely Lisa. I enjoyed the clip too, cooling me down.
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Di, happy to cool you down. Your comment warms me <3
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Quite creative poem. Nicely done.
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Thanks much, Arcadia Maria!
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That is really awesome! It’s great descriptive wise.
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Thanks much, Max!
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Lovely poem and clever response to the prompt, Lisa!
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Miriam glad you liked it :) I was feelin it also.
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A delightful poem, Lisa
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Robbie, thank you.
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Excellent, Li, with some very creative descriptors. 🙂
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Thanks, Punam!
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You are welcome, Li.
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Beautifully written Li.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome 🤗
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I see the bird, I read the hope ❤️
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Love what you see, Paul <3
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❤️
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Nice one!!!
much♡love
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Thanks much, Gillena!
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the stalactites of winter – nice piece of guess poetry in concrete form ;)
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Thanks much, Laura. I like them as stalactites of winter :)
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What a beautiful poem, Lisa! I love that it takes the form of some icicles as well.
Yvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Yvette, very happy you enjoyed the poem and the visual.
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A very cool piece. Very cool.
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Thanks, Chris :)
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Took me a minute to figure it out.🤭
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:)
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Beautiful 😍
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I love the snow ❄️❄️❄️
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<3
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