dVerse Q231 – One Voice

One Voice

Mentation works overmuch
to grasp how foul memetics
daft chiseler has strewn
to infect our bloodshot world.
How, with rancid spell unleashed,
may we now contain it, to cast
where deep, iron-encased,
unspeakable things dwell?
Let us raise our voice,
one song, in light.

De, aka whimsygizmo, is today’s host of dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. De would like us to write a 44-word poem that includes the word much.

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  1. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo says:

    “bloodshot world” is SUCH a powerful visual. Whew. I love this.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      De, thank you <3

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    2. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

      Interesting memetics and mentations

      much♡love

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      1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

        Thanks, Gillena :)

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  2. We need that light more than ever

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I wonder what would happen if everyone would just take the same day and focus on things that bring light? It might be like Dorothy throwing water…

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  3. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Well written, Lisa. I am afraid the genie is out of the bottle at this point1

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Yes it is, Dwight, and now we have to deal with it. Sitting back and letting it have its way unimpeded just isn’t acceptable.

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  4. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

    The rancid smell–too much! Yes, to the one voice, the light!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Merril. I know we can do it.

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      1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

        You’re welcome, Li. I hope so!

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  5. Aaron Guile's avatar Aaron Guile says:

    I like how you name him, “memetics
    daft chiseler.” I wonder the same thing. The one thing I know is that being silent or still doesn’t work. I agree with your prayer.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you, Aaron. In this situation it won’t.

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  6. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    Lisa, I love how your poem encourages creative resistance – a shared voice to counter this pervasive toxicity which is spreading so rapidly 🙌

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ange, well said.

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  7. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    How is indeed the question. But we must not remain silent. (K)

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  8. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    Let us raise our voice,
    one song, in light.

    Hopefully, more light will will lead the way out of this darkness

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      <3 I see it as a laser beam, cutting away the blankets of darkness.

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  9. jaerose37's avatar jaerose37 says:

    What arresting imagery – really draws the reader in – Jae

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Jae, thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts on the poem.

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  10. amen, hallelujah and namaste, Li! 💕

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  11. Such a feeling of heaviness in your poem but oh yes rise with light, surely this darkness that is trying to infect the world cannot last.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      :::praying::: Di, it feels like we were already weakened by Covid, then…

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      1. Yeah, life certainly hasn’t been the same since. :(

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  12. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    An inspiring poem my friend.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sadje, many thanks.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re very welcome

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  13. I think we’re much on the same wavelength – only your language is a lot more interesting!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Rosemary with concentrated light, no darkness can stand. Glad we are on the same wavelength <3

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  14. Helen's avatar hdwoonie2337a7ee75a6 says:

    I wasn’t certain what memetics actually meant and now that I have the definitive definition, your poem’s meaning / impact boggles the mind! Daft chisler indeed. Let there be light!!! A huge wowee from Helen.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks so much, Helen.

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  15. M Jay Dixit's avatar M Jay Dixit says:

    Powerful poetry, Lisa 👏👏👏

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks very much, Jay.

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  16. My first read-through I have to admit was rocky. I then googled some of the more unfamiliar words and wow, you hit the nail on the head with this! Nice!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Christine, I appreciate you going the extra mile with the poem. Thank you <3

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  17. There can never be too much light.

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  18. Carol C's avatar Carol C says:

    This packs a punch, Lisa! Not one word wasted!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Carol, many thanks.

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  19. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    A potent verse! And a great song accompaniment. One of my faves of theirs… I enjoyed the chapter on it in Bono’s book, and remember it well from seeing U2 play here in 2011.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Steve, you’ve seen it from several angles.

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        Ha! I hadn’t thought of it that way, but you’re absolutely correct, Lisa!

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