#FF — “Help Me”

PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart

Help Me”

Help me.”

The faint muffled plea came from Rea’s left. While perusing the tall concrete fence, iron bars, and barbed wire, a tiny ::plop:: led her eyes to a plastic-wrapped packet resting in a drainage tube near the grass. Rea pretended to lose direction while reading her phone, to act surprised by something on it, then dropped it close enough to the packet to pick it up.

The missive from Phan described her decade-long imprisonment; that “old toys” were disappeared; that she was next; and a plan, date, time.

On the night, Rea’s pipe bomb liberated Phan.

Next comes revenge.

[100 words]

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.

8 Comments Add yours

  1. Dear Lisa,

    Clever and intriguing use of the prompt. You certainly used your imagination to the full extent.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Rochelle, happy you enjoyed the story. This time I used the magnifying glass and saw the drainage hole and the story took off from there.
      Thank you!
      Shalom,
      Lisa

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      1. You are most welcome, Lisa! 🥰

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  2. I considered using the fence. I like the way you did this

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Neil, thanks much!

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  3. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    This is so exciting Lisa – intriguing – I look forward to the follow up 😃

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ange, thanks! You never know, maybe :)

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  4. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites says:

    Ooh, you’ve picked out a detail but taken it a whole unexpected way as well. Phan asks for help and Rea obliterates her? Intriguing!

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