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Jones is my wildling……….middle name. Born ravenous……………..under howling moon Chronic condition…………..that won’t be tamed Drive for satisfaction, source of bleeding shame Hungry for nouns, verbs, superlative adjectives, where moderation…………..is a dirty word. I’m outside of a world………that demands control.
I am today’s host for dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. The prompt is to write a 44-word poem using some form of hunger.
That is different, Lisa, especially the form for a quadrille, and the subject wild and ravenous, a kind of grammatical/poetic werewolf ‘hungry for nouns, verbs, superlative adjectives’,
Creativity, untamed, in a “world that demands control” is the realm of us “wildlings,” I think. I love the hunger that comes through your words, Li, “ravenous …. under howling moon.”
Thanks much, Jim. Temple of the Dog is the group that came together after Mother Love Bone’s lead singer, Andy Wood, died from a drug OD. Chris Cornell and Matt Cameron (drummer) from Soundgarden; Mike McCready (lead guitar,) Jeff Ament (bass,) and Stone Gossard (rhythm guitar) from Mother Love Bone; and Eddie Vedder, who later replaced Andy and renamed themselves Pearl Jam. Matt later become PJ’s drummer.
Jim, oops on that comment. You were talking about the St. Vincent song, not the Temple of the Dog song I used in my dVerse prompt. Yes, St. Vincent song is very pretty :)
Glyn, the more I heard of St. Vincent, the more I like. I know that everyone’s in a tizzy because Bad Bunny’s album is completely in Spanish, but St. Vincent did them one better: they took one of their albums and re-recorded it all in Spanish.
Brilliant Lisa – defiant and unapologetic, you’ve captured the exhaustion and the exhilaration of having a ‘drive for satisfaction’ that never quite stops🙌
That is different, Lisa, especially the form for a quadrille, and the subject wild and ravenous, a kind of grammatical/poetic werewolf ‘hungry for nouns, verbs, superlative adjectives’,
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Thanks, Kim. I like how you see it :)
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You’re welcome, Lisa.
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Kim, very sorry to hear about your vision situation.
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Thank you, Lisa.
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Creativity, untamed, in a “world that demands control” is the realm of us “wildlings,” I think. I love the hunger that comes through your words, Li, “ravenous …. under howling moon.”
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Dora, thank you very much. Avoiding being siphoned in one way or another makes the hunger all the greater imo.
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Lovely music, Lisa.
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Thanks much, Jim. Temple of the Dog is the group that came together after Mother Love Bone’s lead singer, Andy Wood, died from a drug OD. Chris Cornell and Matt Cameron (drummer) from Soundgarden; Mike McCready (lead guitar,) Jeff Ament (bass,) and Stone Gossard (rhythm guitar) from Mother Love Bone; and Eddie Vedder, who later replaced Andy and renamed themselves Pearl Jam. Matt later become PJ’s drummer.
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Jim, oops on that comment. You were talking about the St. Vincent song, not the Temple of the Dog song I used in my dVerse prompt. Yes, St. Vincent song is very pretty :)
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That makes more sense now, as I didn’t think all these groups were related.
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Jim, the comment applies to another song. These groups are all related!
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That is so original, Lisa! Excellent, Miss Wildling!
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Dale, thanks so much! Much appreciated. From one Wildling to Another <3
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Ya think I am? I like that idea! :)
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Yes, I do :)
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😁
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moderation is the dirtiest word for me when it comes to poetry. let all those words flow
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It may be the last stand of freedom.
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I must catch up on St. Vincent
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Glyn, the more I heard of St. Vincent, the more I like. I know that everyone’s in a tizzy because Bad Bunny’s album is completely in Spanish, but St. Vincent did them one better: they took one of their albums and re-recorded it all in Spanish.
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Hungry for words of all types…may we never be satiated. (K)
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<3
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Love this piece, L; esp the 2 closing lines (right up my alley). I can’t even spell Moderation…
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Ron. thanks so much for your kind words.
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Oh, and THANKS for the cool prompt!
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You are very welcome.
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I love all the punnage in your poem, the whole concept, the form, the title. Your wildling self is evident 🤍
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Sunra, your comment makes my day. I see your wildling self also <3
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❤️
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Brilliant Lisa – defiant and unapologetic, you’ve captured the exhaustion and the exhilaration of having a ‘drive for satisfaction’ that never quite stops🙌
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Ange, thank you for the wonderful feedback. You describe that drive so well.
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♥️
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Interesting and unique choice of form. The hunger for words written or spoken continues to feed our appetite for satisfaction.
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Truedessa thanks so much, and yes they do.
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Ha! You’re insatiable! Such a zesty poem.
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D, you got it. I was going to post the song by the Rolling Stones, “I Can’t Get No Satisfaction” but went with Temple of the Dogs instead.
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https://www.google.com/search?q=stay+hungry+talking+heads+lyrics&oq=Stay+&gs_lcrp=EgZjaHJvbWUqDQgDEAAYkQIYgAQYigUyBggAEEUYOTIMCAEQLhhDGIAEGIoFMg0IAhAuGJECGIAEGIoFMg0IAxAAGJECGIAEGIoFMgwIBBAuGEMYgAQYigUyDAgFEC4YQxiABBiKBTIGCAYQRRg9MgYIBxBFGD3SAQgzMDk1ajBqN6gCALACAA&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:b3278391,vid:zOt6MfTDK0s,st:0
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They were sure hungry then! Love the Talking Heads :)
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as a fellow “wildling” I can relate to this poem! Loved the formatting as well also great tunes!
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Cara, glad you can relate, you wildling, you :) Thank you on formatting and the music.
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Very cool, Lisa! :)
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:)
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where moderation…………..is a dirty word.I’m outside of a world………that demands control.
1- I love the layout of your quadrille. 2- Those two lines have hit hard, summing up the last couple of months for me.
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Raivenne, I hear you. Thank you and good to see you at dVerse.
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Nicely done, Lisa.
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Dwight, thanks, my friend.
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You are welcome.
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Moderation. Pffft!
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:)
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“Born ravenous…Hungry for nouns, verbs, superlative adjectives” I like that. Stay hungry, Li!
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<3 thanks!
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Yes, poets are the hungry wildlings :D Unique take on a great prompt…thanks, Lisa!
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Love the form here. Great job Li.
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This is thought provoking. I think all creatives sit outside the established boundaries for conformity.
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Loved the format. Well done Lisa!
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A unique idea Li.
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An interesting hunger. Luv wbere this prompt took you
Thanms for dropping by my blog
much love
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And never to be satiated … 💞Suzanne
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This kind of hunger should never be satiated! I always had a sneaky feeling about your wildling ways! 😉
Cool formatting too.
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I love the double meaning of the last line, Lisa. Provocative writing! 👏
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Ah, what a lovely response. It is cleverly written, too. Needless to say, I enjoyed reading your poem and getting to know you. :-)
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