dVerse Poetics — Gotham: The First Domino

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Gotham:  The First Domino

Ship cast asea, its belly full
Coal gone, no more steam
Itched and brittle with scurvy
Noxious fog, lost instruments
Sails hoisted, yet no wind
Mates and passengers alike
On our knees, we cough and pray,
Facing mid-Atlantic gruesome end,
To end albatross, millstone 'round
Our sickly necks; orange, stenched
Corpse, raucous croak of certain death,
It rots above us in the crow's nest.

Then comes distant thunder rumbles; 
Far Gotham of East (West.) Its temple 
Raised with many hands, Hope in its 
Domino-shaped stele; its lightning 
Alchemizes foul fog to fair clouds,
Forms water spouts carrying fish,
Fruit, and fresh water to famished.
Screeching zombie gull lifted up,
Away, downward, beneath waves,
Silent now. A-move with gales & cheers,
Our bellies and hearts full, resolute:
Land, embark, build more dominos.

I am today’s host for dVerse’ Tuesday Poetics. The prompt is to write a poem using weather.

6 Comments Add yours

  1. There is nothing worse at sea than no wind… love the way they were saved by that storm… (talk about being dependent on weather)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Indeed, out of coal and out of wind is a bad situation at sea. I’m glad prayers were answered.

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  2. Aptivi's avatar Aptivi says:

    A wonderful piece. Also, I really enjoyed watching the video; I like how the dominoes fell from the start to the end 👍

    Thank you so much for sharing this awesomeness, Lisa! That made me smile ☺️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Aptivi, thank you very much and glad you enjoyed it :)

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      1. Aptivi's avatar Aptivi says:

        You’re most welcome, Lisa ☺️

        I hope you’re having a wonderful day today.

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  3. Love this. Very nautical. I’m posting something on a similar topic tomorrow

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