
The Temple
I meet Jeremy at a political rally. He’s selling buttons that are pinned to his white robe. Jeremy looks like a young George Harrison. He mesmerizes me with his smile and soothing tones.
On the back of my purchased “Clean Water for MI” button, I notice contact information for The Temple.
“What’s the Temple?,” I ask Jeremy.
“I’m glad you ask. It’s a place where people who want clean water and world peace gather.”
At my first meeting at The Temple, I understand that clean water and world peace are their smallest dolls of want. Bigger ones: money, power, obedience, domination…
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Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.


Unfortunately, that’s so true, as there is no world peace these days. There is only domination, money, power, and so on in the world’s current state.
A poignant story, Lisa 👍
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Aptivi, thanks for reading and for your comment. Nothing seems to be simple these days :(
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You’re most welcome, Lisa. I’m with you on this one. :(
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Sounds like a sinister set-up, and hopefully there is a chance to pivot and find the exit door of The Temple, Lisa.
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I hear you, Bruce. I was trying to show how cults can draw people in under disguises.
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“The good” always hides the real…
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Yes, those “happy shiny faces” masks
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Nicely done, Lisa
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Thanks, Neil :)
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great take Li 💜💜 cool story!
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CA thanks so much!
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Exactly Lisa 💜💜💜
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You nailed it, right there. Loved the tone of the narrator in this. Well done
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Sandra, thanks so much <3
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Behind every ideology, no matter how benign it sounds, are people who want to rule you.
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Totally agree, James. It’s why you have to stay on your toes and watch leaders’ actions over time.
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She couldn’t hear me yelling to not follow!
Very nicely done, my friend. And thanks for a great photo!
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Dale, I was doing the same thing! Thanks on the photo. I took that one awhile back.
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And she didn’t listen!
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This is great, Lisa. I was reminded of an excellent quote by Stephen Colbert: ““Here’s an easy way to figure out if you’re in a cult: If you’re wondering whether you’re in a cult, the answer is yes.”
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lol. I miss Colbert SO MUCH.
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it’s a trap. you’d better run as fast as you can before it’s too late.
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I hope she takes your advice, Plaridel.
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Hopefully, her first meeting was also her last.
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I hope so also, Keith.
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A most interesting take, Li.
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Chris, thank you.
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Dear Lisa,
I could feel the betrayal she must be feeling. Time to turn tail and run. (but to where these days?) Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, good question on where to run to these days. It feels like we are surrounded by charlatans. Thank you.
Shalom,
Lisa
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Yes, every cult has a trap.
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The door is always open when you enter, not when you need an exit. Great story on misrepresentation.
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Excellent comment, thank you.
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Ooooo oh no. Cult it’s a cult. Get out now
Great descriptions here of the subtle introduction to manipulation
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Thanks, Laurie!
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Scary – the groups that can lure innocence in.
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Indeed.
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