Summer’s End

Summer’s End

Cicadas’ chorus
Replaced by crickets’ chirps

Whoosh of leaves
Replaced by rustle

Sun as Close King
Replaced by Retreating Prince

Balmy breezes
Replaced by chilled rushes

Lounging waterside on beach towels
Replaced by huddles on blanketed benches

Trees arrayed with greenery
Replaced by decaying colors

Waking to light and sleeping still light
Replaced by dark to dark

All night awake slumber parties
Replaced by wash your face brush your teeth go to bed

Ice cream sundaes and corn dog stands in the afternoon
Replaced by warm cider and donuts by the evening fire

Long vines with pumpkins attached
Replaced by carved orange faces

11 Comments Add yours

  1. odhran25's avatar odhran25 says:

    I love the contrast of nature images for this turning time of year. Lovely!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      thank you very much.

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  2. seekingmeme's avatar seekingmeme says:

    I enjoyed this poem, but I have to confess – it reminded me how much I prefer summer to fall! LOL
    Welcome aboard for OctPoWriMo 2017!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      glad you enjoyed the poem! Thank you for the welcome :)

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  3. Love the imagery. It’s so filled with truths and things that make me smile for Summer and not Summer, :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      glad it made you smile :)

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  4. Beth Camp's avatar Beth Camp says:

    Lovely contrasts between summer and fall, such a profoundly transitional season. I liked those reminders of summers past. Happy poetry-writing month!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glad you liked it. Thank you, so far it’s been fun :)

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  5. mkvecchitto's avatar mkvecchitto says:

    Reblogged this on Writing and Reflections and commented:
    Here is one of the many fantastic poems written during last year’s #OctPoWriMo. Don’t forget to sign up for this year’s poetry challenge.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you for your kindness towards the poem. I’m looking forward to this year’s #OctPoWriMo. See you there! :)

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      1. mkvecchitto's avatar mkvecchitto says:

        Me too! See you there 🙂

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