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  1. Spiral Artist's avatar Spiral Artist says:
    October 11, 2018 at 3:02 am

    I was like, okay, so either there’s a dagger in there but no, noooo it’s LOVE! YES! (the crowd goes wild!)

    The line breaks are used to great effect here, each line becoming a “droplet.”

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 11, 2018 at 11:05 am

      Its a really fancy syringe.* I thought my painting looked like cells injected/infected with love.
      *j/k

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      1. Spiral Artist's avatar Spiral Artist says:
        October 11, 2018 at 5:00 pm

        Yess, but “oh happy dagger” comes to mind ;)

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  2. Namratha Varadharajan's avatar Namratha Varadharajan says:
    October 11, 2018 at 12:52 pm

    Immersion in another is akin to being addicted. I get it. Nicely done

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 11, 2018 at 5:09 pm

      thank you, Namy

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  3. S. M. Saves's avatar S. M. Saves says:
    October 13, 2018 at 9:52 pm

    The petals do look like cells! Cell walls exploding from the ecstasy of so much love. Cell-gasms.
    Sorry, that was weird. Can you tell I really like this poem? :D

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 13, 2018 at 10:32 pm

      I love the idea of and the word cell-gasm! Exactly! glad you really like it :)

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