Dream haibun

grass

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It was actually earlier this morning when I was in the state between sleep and waking that I dreamed this, but the haiku was not in word, but in visual form, so would that make it a vision more than a dream? Not sure. Anyway, I received the image of a piece of grass close up, as if I was very small, with a mote of dust caught on the tip of the grass and moving in the breeze, then felt God was smiling at it. I didn’t see God, but felt God looking at it and smiling.

Dust mote caught by breeze

on the tip of a blade of grass

makes God smile.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

15 Comments Add yours

  1. SanaH says:

    Beautiful lines. I loved the way you described your dream in the form of a poem.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you Sanah ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. https://talesfromthemindofkristian.wordpress.com/2019/03/11/finish-the-story-the-house-on-the-lake/

    I’ve tagged you in this Finish the Story Challenge if you’d like to have a go. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Yes, I would be happy to ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Jordy says:

    Well that is a lovely dream to wake up to! Well written!

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  4. badfinger20 says:

    That is nice…I will admit something embarrassing. I had to look up haibun

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Max, don’t be, I should start putting links back in for the forms. I didn’t know until recently what one was either. Live and learn ๐Ÿ™‚ It was as real as a dream can get.

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      1. badfinger20 says:

        It was really pretty…and I learned something! That is what this is all about.

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  5. pvcann says:

    I really enjoyed this, it just resonated somehow.

    Like

    1. msjadeli says:

      It was a lovely dream โค

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Seems like it ! ๐Ÿ™‚

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