#FF — Swallowed Whole


PHOTO PROMPT © Ted Strutz

Every time, the dream was the same. She was piloting a small seaplane. Looking down she saw the ripples on the lake. She had a flawless landing. Exhilirated, the plane was moving towards the floating dock as the smiling resort staff walked towards her. All of a sudden a slimy behemoth leapt out of the dark water and swallowed her, the plane, and all supplies aboard in one gulp. She woke up then, heart pounding.

The dreams had started when Jher, the new big boss in her salaried, elevated position, started making her work overtime every Sunday — just her and him.

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the inspirational host of Friday Fictioneers.

Note:  “Swallowed Whole” is also the title of an excellent Pearl Jam song, from their, “Lightning Bolt” album, included here if you want to enjoy a little ecstasy in your world.

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  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Good story, interpreting the dream psychology.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome Li.

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  2. Neil MacDonald's avatar neilmacdon says:

    And we know, without you ever having to tell us explicitly. Clever

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  3. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug says:

    It sounds like her dreams aren’t nearly as bad as her boss.

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  4. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:

    She needs to quit soon…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Or get video evidence of what’s going on and take it to admin. Why should she have to quit the great job she was just promoted to because of a sleazeball like that?

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:

        Oh…I was thinking of where I work!
        Hey if she has the evidence then yes she should go for it.
        See I only got that she hated it and was worked to death…I didn’t know anything else was going on…I’m slow at times.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Max you are not slow, you just don’t know what it’s like from a female’s perspective under a lecherous boss.

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          1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:

            No I can’t say I know that. My mind wasn’t going there. I have had to work with females of course being a boss… I wouldn’t dream of that.

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  5. I totally can relate to this. Workplace stress,nightmares…good job!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Dawn.

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  6. Woah! Awesome ending, connected everything so well.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you.

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  7. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    it must have happened before the #metoo movement. otherwise, he’ll be in big trouble already.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Plaridel, I WISH that was true. It continues at near full speed (unless you’re a celebrity, then watch out.)

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  8. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly says:

    Jher sounds horrific. Very well written.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jher is a horrific template for an enormous number of individuals, and yes, Jher is. Thank you, Iain!

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  9. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    You know it’s a bad situation when you start dreaming about it. I’d cut and run.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Sandra. There are a lot who have dreamed of such situations who cut and run. Nowadays my advice is to gather evidence and fight back. Women (and some men) are held back from success by the “Jhers” and that needs to end.

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  10. trentpmcd's avatar trentpmcd says:

    I agree with some of the other comments – she needs to get evidence and turn the bastard in. Kind of an afterthought, but something you most likely know already – when you are sent a pointed scam email to get you to click, it is phishing but when a high level executive gets one custom made to his or her position, it is whaling – yep, the big boss is often a whale and some don’t feel any guilt in swallowing employees whole…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Trent, for your thoughtful and informed comments.

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  11. draliman's avatar draliman says:

    I can see how that situation could lead to nightmares.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you for reading and commenting, Ali.

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  12. bearmkwa's avatar bearmkwa says:

    At first I thought it to be a modern day take on the Jonah story… but the last line gave it an different twist. Great work!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Bear.

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  13. A good story well written, Jade. I can guess the reason for the dream and I’m not even a psychiatrist. She’s in a difficult place. —- Suzanne

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I bet if she talks to some of the other females in the office she will learn she’s not alone.

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      P.S. Thank you, Suzanne, for your comment.

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  14. She needs to pay attention to her dream and cut and run. Good take on the photo prompt.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you for reading and your comment. Every person will respond differently to this situation. I don’t think she should abandon her new promotion because of some “slimy behemoth.”

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  15. A pleasure to read — like the way it moves from the seaplane, into the behemoth, to her boss, seamlessly. Good writing.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sorry, I just found your comment in my spam folder. Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment, Francine.

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  16. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Always listen to your dreams. (K)

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  17. kzmcb's avatar kzmcb says:

    Eek. I hope she has a supply of harpoons at the ready. Good read.

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  18. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    I concur with Neil. You did a brilliant job on this one!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dale, thank you.

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  19. granonine's avatar granonine says:

    Horrible dream, but understandable for one in a horrid situation. May the monster swallow the boss!

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  20. Abhijit Ray's avatar Abhijit Ray says:

    So, Jher is the slimy behemoth of her dreams that swallowed her? It can be stressful when one is unable to enjoy the Sunday. But every bad time has a shelf life and one day it will be over.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Abhijit, it isn’t the part about working Sundays that is bad here (although that wouldn’t be fun) it is what the boss is doing to her when they are “working” together, just her and him.

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      1. Abhijit Ray's avatar Abhijit Ray says:

        Sexual harassment!

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  21. Those final few words tell us all we need to know. Brilliant.

    My tale – ‘Plane sailing!’

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Keith.

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  22. A situation that happens all too often. I hope a giant slimy behemoth swallows him whole. =) She certainly shouldn’t quit, but speak up! Nicely written story, very subtle and clever.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much and yes, it’s what the behemoth needs.

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  23. mitchrey1990's avatar lisarey1990 says:

    She needs to get out of this situation! Great write.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Agreed. Thank you for reading and commenting, Lisa :)

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  24. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 says:

    A good metaphor for a situation too many of us face. You’re right – if she can gather the evidence, she should bring Jher to book. If she can’t, she’ll have to cut and run. Of course, if she has a big, tough boyfriend, another option opens for her…predators tend to be easily intimidated; they look for easy pickings.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Well-said on all, Penny!

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  25. Mike's avatar Mike says:

    Oh … I could think for a few things to do to Jher.

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  26. Nan Falkner's avatar Nan Falkner says:

    Jher is a snake in the grass! Wow – I read this twice and it even got better the second time. Good writing!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Nan, thank you. Yes, he is.

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  27. Nan Falkner's avatar Nan Falkner says:

    Jher is a snake – I wrote a message earlier, but it got erased – Sorry! Nice story.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes he is and no offense to real snakes. Thank you for reading and commenting, Nan.

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  28. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell says:

    Oooo the dreams a portent? a warning… she’d best be careful. He’s not to be trusted

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Or he’s already done something and her dream world is telling her something needs to change… Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comment, Laurie :)

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  29. Mags's avatar magarisa says:

    She better get out of the situation before it’s too late! I wonder if she has a history of dreaming prophetically. Nicely done, Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Magarisa, for reading and commenting.

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      1. Mags's avatar magarisa says:

        My pleasure, Li. :-)

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