dVerse — quadrille — every august

Summer House, Pennsylvania Park, Petoskey, Michigan
Vintage Original Postcard #2765 – August 27, 1925

 

every august

they’re already
warmed up

warblers gargle
lilies whisper puffs
crickets ratchet time
surfs shush
creeks tinkle
grasses russ
cicadas twang
redtails whoosh
goldfinches chatter
bees hmmmm

if you listen closely
you will hear
green echoes
and small creaks
voices from the trees —
heaven’s accompaniment

 

De (aka WhimsyGizmo) is the host of dVerse today.  De says:
it’s that time again: time to pen a poem of exactly 44 words, including one specific word we provide. Today, I’d like you to use your voice.

 

64 Comments Add yours

  1. lovely orchestra of nature described! :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Na’ama :)

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  2. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo says:

    All of these voices make such gorgeous music together. I can hear them.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I’m glad, thanks De :)

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  3. robtkistner's avatar robtkistner says:

    So many voices raised in the wonderful piece Lisa — nature in hamony!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rob thank you :)

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  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A lovely poem. Painting a peaceful picture

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje. I wait for this symphony every year.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome Li.

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  5. Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr's avatar rivrvlogr says:

    All of those voices make for a pleasant song.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Ken thank you, yes they do.

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  6. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford says:

    This so beautifully captures the sounds I enjoy from our woods.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glad you enjoy the song in words and woods :)

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  7. I like your use of all the voices!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, glad you enjoy them.

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  8. Another charming piece! Love the photo too. Looks like paradise!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Susan.

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  9. kanzensakura's avatar kanzensakura says:

    Such a lovely array of voices. I go to my forest daily to listen and hear this exact things you have written. Beautiful.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Very glad you recognize the voices, Toni.

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  10. That’s lovely. So much to hear in the silence of things. ;-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you JP, indeed.

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  11. An entire choir of nature. I adore this!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Linda. Nature is so good to us, why do we do it so wrong?

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      1. My opinion- Because others aren’t paying attention.

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  12. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    So many rich voices to be heard in this poem. I have to love the goldfinches chatter.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Truedessa, glad you enjoyed the voices, and the goldfinches :)

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  13. lynn__'s avatar lynn__ says:

    Love the voices in nature…enjoyed this, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Lynn. August is a daily symphony around here :)

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  14. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    Love the sounds in your words specially: voices from the trees.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Grace thank you. The trees witness all and sometimes chime in a little.

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  15. When nature sings, it is symphony! Lovely!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Punam, thank you. Yes, a lovely symphony <3

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      1. You are welcome. 🙂

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  16. Glenn A. Buttkus's avatar Glenn A. Buttkus says:

    The city plays symphony, all brass and Jazz hot–the woods also play a symphony, all strings and choral.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      <3 I wonder what it would sound like if they collaborated on a concert?

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  17. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    I love the voices of birds!! Very nice!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Dwight. I forgot the mourning doves, but they are here daily as well as a bunch of others.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        They sit on my rail and watch us eat breakfast!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          They probably want your toast. That’s very cool. When I open the door, they fly up to the top of the garage roof, but they never go far.

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          1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

            The seem to always be around!

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  18. Ah, nature’s voices Beautiful Lisa 🙂

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks glad you enjoyed them, Christine :)

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  19. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love the relaxing voices of August, Jade, which you’ve brought together in a beautiful onomatopoeic chorus of a quadrille! I especially like the lilies whispering puffs and the green echoes and small creaks of the trees.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Kim. I like the way you describe it as: “a beautiful onomatopoeic chorus of a quadrille!”

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  20. A beautiul choir of voices…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Bjorn. It’s a daily choir at this time of year…

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  21. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    Really a park named Pennsylvania (Penn’s Woods)- that’s cool…
    Like all the sounds of nature in this one :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glad you enjoyed the sounds of nature, thanks, even though I can’t take credit for the sounds :)

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  22. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    I love this chorus! (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I’m glad, K, it’s a joy to hear.

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  23. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny says:

    There are many voices out there we tend to ignore. Good suggestion to pay more attention to them.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes. Thank you for your comment, Frank.

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  24. Just Barry's avatar Just Barry says:

    Nature as band, choir, and lead vocals… lovely sentiments!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Barry, thank you and glad you enjoyed it :)

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  25. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    That is some choir and orchestra, but the onus is truly on the listener to attend, wonderful.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I love your comment and your p.o.v. of the world.

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      1. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

        Thank you, and what a great post.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          :) you are welcome, Paul

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  26. Lona Gynt's avatar Lona Gynt says:

    Wonderful symphony, as long as none of em are hungry. bzzz. the voices blended in my ears, so well done!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Lona, glad you enjoyed the poem.

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  27. Dead of Winter Now
    to: Leaves Fallen Sky
    Frost Darkness Distance
    Miles away Train Whistle
    Signals Echoing Sound
    FaRtHeR
    TiMe
    iLLusion
    Away From:
    WiNTeR LoVE..:)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Anything to get away from winter!

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      1. SMiLes in
        Florida
        Last Few
        Years Winter
        Lost Hot
        Chocolate
        Nostalgia
        All that’s Left…
        Always something
        To
        Miss in
        DarK in LiGHT..
        Woe is ClimAte Change..:)

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