The Oracle speaks

 

July 17a

bright wild grass
full fresh breeze
would be let grow deep
berry nature never leave
make down’s sun stroll
rose spirit shine eat
say and use rainy thing
am out of hot beneath
soon life rustle peace
he did climb warm wet river rock
they breathed his harmony path

21 Comments Add yours

  1. Gina says:

    your unique arrangement of words give deeper meaning to each line, like slowly becoming one with the wild grass and nature

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    1. msjadeli says:

      It was an interesting mix of worlds they gave me. It produced an interesting poem…

      Like

      1. Gina says:

        Very Impressed how you chose the way the words went.

        Liked by 1 person

        1. msjadeli says:

          🙂 Thank you, Gina!

          Liked by 1 person

  2. PaperKutzs says:

    this is beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  3. badfinger20 says:

    I really like the line… soon life rustle peace

    Liked by 1 person

      1. badfinger20 says:

        Sorry… lines grab my attention. You have good lines in your poems.

        Liked by 1 person

  4. Sadje says:

    Very interesting poem, Li.

    Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome 😉

        Liked by 1 person

  5. Very impressive, Li. You have given a new meaning to these words.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Punam, thank you for the new perspective 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. You are welcome. 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  6. Lael-Heart says:

    You’ve got me craving these kinds of days ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  7. pvcann says:

    Love that opening line.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you and glad you do.

      Liked by 1 person

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