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The Oracle speaks

Posted by Lisa or Li on

 

July 17a

bright wild grass
full fresh breeze
would be let grow deep
berry nature never leave
make down’s sun stroll
rose spirit shine eat
say and use rainy thing
am out of hot beneath
soon life rustle peace
he did climb warm wet river rock
they breathed his harmony path

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  1. Gina@alifelesslived's avatar Gina says:
    January 26, 2020 at 5:01 pm

    your unique arrangement of words give deeper meaning to each line, like slowly becoming one with the wild grass and nature

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      January 26, 2020 at 7:45 pm

      It was an interesting mix of worlds they gave me. It produced an interesting poem…

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      1. Gina@alifelesslived's avatar Gina says:
        January 26, 2020 at 7:48 pm

        Very Impressed how you chose the way the words went.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
          January 26, 2020 at 7:58 pm

          :) Thank you, Gina!

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  2. PaperKutzs's avatar PaperKutzs says:
    January 26, 2020 at 5:42 pm

    this is beautiful

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      January 26, 2020 at 7:57 pm

      Thank you.

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  3. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:
    January 26, 2020 at 7:30 pm

    I really like the line… soon life rustle peace

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      January 26, 2020 at 7:58 pm

      Thanks, Max.

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:
        January 26, 2020 at 8:04 pm

        Sorry… lines grab my attention. You have good lines in your poems.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
          January 26, 2020 at 9:27 pm

          :)

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        2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
          January 26, 2020 at 9:27 pm

          Thank you.

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  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
    January 26, 2020 at 9:00 pm

    Very interesting poem, Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      January 26, 2020 at 9:30 pm

      Thanks Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
        January 27, 2020 at 12:23 am

        Youā€™re welcome šŸ˜‰

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  5. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged says:
    January 26, 2020 at 9:58 pm

    Very impressive, Li. You have given a new meaning to these words.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      January 27, 2020 at 12:48 pm

      Punam, thank you for the new perspective :)

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      1. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged says:
        January 27, 2020 at 9:51 pm

        You are welcome. šŸ™‚

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  6. gigilaeli's avatar Lael-Heart says:
    January 27, 2020 at 1:05 pm

    You’ve got me craving these kinds of days <3

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      January 27, 2020 at 2:05 pm

      :)

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  7. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:
    January 29, 2020 at 10:27 am

    Love that opening line.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      January 29, 2020 at 3:30 pm

      Thank you and glad you do.

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