Spring’s sun melts snow
Hawk’s shadow warns too late —
Seeds left uneaten.
Frank J. Tassone is the host of Haikai Challenge. Frank says:
This week, write the haikai poem of you choice (haiku, senryu, haibun, tanka, haiga, renga, etc.) that alludes to the hawk (taka)
This is my second attempt at a haiga. Any constructive criticism is welcome.