Spring’s sun melts snow
Hawk’s shadow warns too late —
Seeds left uneaten.
Frank J. Tassone is the host of Haikai Challenge. Frank says:
This week, write the haikai poem of you choice (haiku, senryu, haibun, tanka, haiga, renga, etc.) that alludes to the hawk (taka)
This is my second attempt at a haiga. Any constructive criticism is welcome.
I read that a haiga was a haiku poets painting of everyday life. And to me your haiga does just that. A very seasonal painting of a specific locality.
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Gina thank you for the feedback!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (2/11/20): Jade Li’s latest #haiga for my current #haikai challenge!
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