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dVerse — prosery — Alive

Above Digital Art - Above The Clouds City Dome by Dan Collier
“Above the Clouds City Dome” by Dan Collier

They lived above the clouds, far from the germs and messiness they’d lied and cheated themselves away from. Luxury abodes with multi-dimensional holodecks immersed them in fairytale landscapes, where things were flawless. Blossoms never wilted; butterflies immortal. Crystal springs gurgled and the insects never bit. Lovers always smiled.

When the virus hit on the planet they weren’t worried. Social distancing had been their privilege for decades. The Overlords’ sky abodes were linked to each other in a wagonwheel configuration, all joined to the Platform. The Platform was the umbilical cord of life to the Overlords. Water, food, drugs, medicine, electricity, wifi, etc. all rose through the pneumatic machinery of the Tube under it. The hum of it throbbed like a heartbeat.

One morning they woke to silence. No one left and no one came on the bare platform. Now facing reality, they felt alive.

 

Sarah is today’s host of dVerse.  Sarah says:
For this prompt, we ask you to write a piece of flash fiction in 144 words or less, including a quotation from a poem.  This week’s quotation is:

No one left and no one came on the bare platform.
— from Adelstrop by Edward Thomas

40 thoughts on “dVerse — prosery — Alive

  1. The sky is certainly not the limit for your fertile imagination. There’s a Sci Fi film out there called ALETA: BATTLE ANGEL that uses a similar premise. Some religions look at Heaven that way.

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    1. It’s a common theme in sci fi and anime. Where this differs is there are no sky ships to get off and no means of communication for a rescue. Who knows, maybe the earth dwellers simply got tired of their sh*t and pulled their plug.

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  2. That is some imagination Lisa…that was creative. I mean “wagonwheel configuration” and “multi-dimensional holodecks immersed them in fairytale landscapes”… great job Lisa.

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  3. I enjoyed your science fiction ‘utopia’, Lisa, ‘above the clouds, far from the germs and messiness they’d lied and cheated themselves away from’. Who were these liars and cheats who left everyone else to die? I can imagine… Serves them right.

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