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“How’s the suite? What’s that sound?” Jill asks.
“Roomy with lots of windows. It’s a thunderstorm.” Jack says.
“Ooh, nice! And a thunderstorm sounds cozy. Take a pic, I want to see!” says Jill.
Jack snaps a quick pic, then sends.
Jill zooms in on the bits of figures in the corners. Wait! That’s Terra and Nova, identical twin sisters – who are also her best friends and supposed to be vacationing in Mexico right now!
“What are they doing there!?”
Jill looks at Brock, Nova’s god-like gorgeous husband, sprawled naked on her bed.
“Uh….”
[100 words]
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the tale-spinning host of Friday Fictioneers.
Tao Talk 
Hah! Gotta watch those reflections 😜
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Thanks, Paula! I can’t tell you the number of times I’ve taken pics to later seeing something in it I missed at the time I took it.
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Busted. That made me smile
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🙂
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Sounds like Jack and Jill are made for each other. Next time, instead of making Jack spend a crown, they should just get together for a tumble…
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LOL love your comment, Trent! Tru dat!
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With the names you used, I couldn’t resist
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🙂
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Good take Li
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Thank you, Sadje 🙂
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You’re welcome
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A Freudian slip. (K )
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One of my old CJ professors said that every criminal wants to get caught and will always leave a clue. I tend to agree with him. It’s just getting those bloodhound investigators looking.
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Our looking skills are not the best, which is probably why so many get away with it…
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Seems like everyone has some explaining to do! 🙂
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🙂
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Well what a surprise. Mind you it is nice of Jill to look after Brock while Nova is away on holiday.
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🙂 Thanks for reading and your comment, James.
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Hoist on her own petard, as the old saying goes. Nice twist 🙂
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LOL thank you, Linda, indeed!
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They do say that every picture tells a story! Nice one Lisa.
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Keith, many thanks.
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Dear Lisa,
Cat and mouse indeed. 😉 Quite the twist. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, glad you enjoyed the story 🙂 Thank you.
Shalom,
Lisa
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It would serve her right if her own husband asked her to send a selfie.
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LOL!
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Oops – what a careless photograph! You made me smile, Lisa!
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Thank you, Penny!
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Looks like Jack and Jill are swingers/players!
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They’re something alright!
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When the cat’s away, the mice will play. They don’t sound like nice people.
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Thanks for reading and I guess they are all suited for each other in their own way…
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what can i say? gotcha! 🙂
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🙂 exactly!
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This is going to be good…. the explanation I mean. It’s also going to be completely unbelievable.
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I’d like to see him dig that hole lol
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A fun story, Lisa. Swapping swingers?
Oh what a tangled web we weave when everyone has a camera and the ability to send pics to the world instantly. Ya never know who is bonking who (or whose). Life is so interesting. 🙂 Yolo.
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Great comment, Bill. Thanks!
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I’ve been binging on Grey’s Anatomy. No holds barred. 🙂
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It’s good to travel to other places, if only through a TV series 🙂
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So much hanky-panky in one hospital. 🙂
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Karma can bit you in some odd places, eh!
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Indeed!
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oops … not all pics are to be shared (even, or especially, if …. um … friends are …) eh?
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Modern life has its drawbacks, certainly the camera is a great spy. Darn it you have got me thinking and smiling.🙂
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Haha! Yes it is! I think most apps these days you have to agree to certain permissions, often involving cameras and microphones. Alexa is the greatest spy of the bunch! Thanks for reading and your comment, Michael 🙂
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Lovely and very apt title and a story to go with it.
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Thanks much, Neel.
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Oh oh!
I sense a dramatic moment to come haha!
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🙂
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Really puts “Jill came tumbling after” in a whole new perspective
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LOL I love that! Perfect!
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She has keen eyes to spot & realize.
Cheating & meeting!
Life is fleeting.
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Yes she does! Yes it is. Thanks for reading and commenting, Anita.
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