#FF — Cat and Mouse Play


PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart

How’s the suite? What’s that sound?” Jill asks.

Roomy with lots of windows. It’s a thunderstorm.” Jack says.

Ooh, nice!  And a thunderstorm sounds cozy. Take a pic, I want to see!” says Jill.

Jack snaps a quick pic, then sends.

Jill zooms in on the bits of figures in the corners. Wait! That’s Terra and Nova, identical twin sisters – who are also her best friends and supposed to be vacationing in Mexico right now!

What are they doing there!?”

Jill looks at Brock, Nova’s god-like gorgeous husband, sprawled naked on her bed.

Uh….”

[100 words]

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the tale-spinning host of Friday Fictioneers.

55 Comments Add yours

  1. Paula Light says:

    Hah! Gotta watch those reflections 😜

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Paula! I can’t tell you the number of times I’ve taken pics to later seeing something in it I missed at the time I took it.

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  2. neilmacdon says:

    Busted. That made me smile

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  3. trentpmcd says:

    Sounds like Jack and Jill are made for each other. Next time, instead of making Jack spend a crown, they should just get together for a tumble…

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    1. msjadeli says:

      LOL love your comment, Trent! Tru dat!

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      1. trentpmcd says:

        With the names you used, I couldn’t resist

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  4. Sadje says:

    Good take Li

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje 🙂

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  5. memadtwo says:

    A Freudian slip. (K )

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    1. msjadeli says:

      One of my old CJ professors said that every criminal wants to get caught and will always leave a clue. I tend to agree with him. It’s just getting those bloodhound investigators looking.

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      1. memadtwo says:

        Our looking skills are not the best, which is probably why so many get away with it…

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  6. Iain Kelly says:

    Seems like everyone has some explaining to do! 🙂

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  7. James McEwan says:

    Well what a surprise. Mind you it is nice of Jill to look after Brock while Nova is away on holiday.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thanks for reading and your comment, James.

      Liked by 1 person

  8. granonine says:

    Hoist on her own petard, as the old saying goes. Nice twist 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      LOL thank you, Linda, indeed!

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  9. They do say that every picture tells a story! Nice one Lisa.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Keith, many thanks.

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  10. Dear Lisa,

    Cat and mouse indeed. 😉 Quite the twist. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Rochelle, glad you enjoyed the story 🙂 Thank you.
      Shalom,
      Lisa

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  11. Liz Young says:

    It would serve her right if her own husband asked her to send a selfie.

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  12. pennygadd51 says:

    Oops – what a careless photograph! You made me smile, Lisa!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Penny!

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  13. Badfinger (Max) says:

    Looks like Jack and Jill are swingers/players!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      They’re something alright!

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  14. Tannille says:

    When the cat’s away, the mice will play. They don’t sound like nice people.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks for reading and I guess they are all suited for each other in their own way…

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  15. plaridel says:

    what can i say? gotcha! 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 exactly!

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  16. Sandra says:

    This is going to be good…. the explanation I mean. It’s also going to be completely unbelievable.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. msjadeli says:

      I’d like to see him dig that hole lol

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  17. Bill says:

    A fun story, Lisa. Swapping swingers?

    Oh what a tangled web we weave when everyone has a camera and the ability to send pics to the world instantly. Ya never know who is bonking who (or whose). Life is so interesting. 🙂 Yolo.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Great comment, Bill. Thanks!

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      1. Bill says:

        I’ve been binging on Grey’s Anatomy. No holds barred. 🙂

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        1. msjadeli says:

          It’s good to travel to other places, if only through a TV series 🙂

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          1. Bill says:

            So much hanky-panky in one hospital. 🙂

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  18. Jules says:

    Karma can bit you in some odd places, eh!

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  19. oops … not all pics are to be shared (even, or especially, if …. um … friends are …) eh?

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  20. michael says:

    Modern life has its drawbacks, certainly the camera is a great spy. Darn it you have got me thinking and smiling.🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Haha! Yes it is! I think most apps these days you have to agree to certain permissions, often involving cameras and microphones. Alexa is the greatest spy of the bunch! Thanks for reading and your comment, Michael 🙂

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  21. Lovely and very apt title and a story to go with it.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Neel.

      Liked by 1 person

  22. Laurie Bell says:

    Oh oh!
    I sense a dramatic moment to come haha!

    Liked by 2 people

  23. subroto says:

    Really puts “Jill came tumbling after” in a whole new perspective

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    1. msjadeli says:

      LOL I love that! Perfect!

      Liked by 1 person

  24. Anita says:

    She has keen eyes to spot & realize.
    Cheating & meeting!
    Life is fleeting.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. msjadeli says:

      Yes she does! Yes it is. Thanks for reading and commenting, Anita.

      Liked by 1 person

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