Turntable Talk Round 10 — Poetry in Lyrics – Achtung Baby (album) by U2

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This is another one of those daunting prompts from Dave, like the one asking us to choose a favorite year in music. Lyrics are probably what leaves the lasting impression in music for me, with many exceptions. Also like other prompts Dave has given us, the song I wanted to use came to me immediately, “One” from U2’s Achtung Baby. Yet dissonance percolated for me, as the album is permeated with the “it’s complicated” poetry of love. Yes, I could have gone for the low-hanging fruit of the plea for world peace in “One” and called it good; but I was in the mood for a fermented cornucopia to sip and pass the bottle.

When Dave gave me the OK to use a whole album of lyrics instead of just one song, I had a very specific purpose in mind. Since we are supposed to be looking for poetic lyrics, I decided to choose favorite poetic lines from each song on it and compose a found poem from them. It took some time to listen to them while reading the lyric list found on the internet (the included ones I have from the CD are too small for these eyes to read anymore) to make sure they were accurate (some tweaks were needed.) Then I spent some time choosing my favorites. It didn’t take me long to see that many of them are presented in couplets. I also noted that about a third were proclaiming the most positive aspects of feeling in love, including excitement, anticipation, freedom, ecstasy, adoration, and timelessness. The other two thirds express varied emotions evoked from it, including anguish, embarrassment, resentment, discouragement, confusion, wistfulness, blame, and existentialism.

I’ve broken up the couplets in some cases and arranged the lines with positive aspects first, then the more complicated aspects. At the end, I kept the section from,Who’s Gonna Ride Your Wild Horsesintact as I didn’t have the heart to break it up.

Her skin is pale like God’s only dove
Screams like an angel for your love
I’m ready for the shuffle – ready for the deal
I’m ready to let go of the steering wheel
We’re free to fly the crimson sky
The sun won’t melt our wings tonight

Time is a train – makes the future the past
Well, my heart is where it’s always been
My head is somewhere in between

The night is bleeding like a cut
Standing in the station
My face pressed up against the glass
Well, you left my heart empty as a vacant lot
For any spirit to haunt
Love is clockworks and cold steel

You act like you never had love
And you want me to go without
You gave me nothing – now it’s all I got
In my dream I was drowning my sorrows
But my sorrows, they learned to swim

Sunrise like a nosebleed
Love is a temple – love the higher law
If you want to kiss the sky, better learn how to kneel
On your knees, boy!
You ask me to enter – then you make me crawl
Have you come here to play Jesus?
To the lepers in your head
To touch is to heal – to hurt is to steal
In dreams begin responsibilities

I disappeared in you – you disappeared from me
She wears my love like a see-through dress
I gave you everything you ever wanted
Between the horses of love and lust
It wasn’t what you wanted
And a woman needs a man like a fish needs a bicycle
You bury your treasure where it can’t be found
But your love is like a secret that’s been passed around
your face of melting snow

Ah, the deeper I spin
Ah, the hunter will sin for your ivory skin
Took a drive in the dirty rain
To a place where the wind calls your name
Under the trees, the river laughing at you and me
Hallelujah, heaven’s white rose
The doors you open I just can’t close

When I look at the above nuances of the greatest force in existence and remind myself that Bono and The Boys have spoken to each one, through the lyrics and the word made manifest in the music, I have take a moment to give a prayerful thanks to each one of them.

Thanks again, Dave, for inviting me to write to the prompt and for giving me some leeway in the parameters.

Song and Source information:

Achtung Baby

Copyright: Lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group
Lyrics were found here.

If you want to read more about this iconic album, here are three first class reviews:

Achtung Baby Review
by Stephen Thomas Erlewine

Rolling Stone’s
Achtung, Baby
Elysa Gardner

Spectrum Culture’s
David Harris
Revisit: U2: Achtung Baby

This post first appeared on Dave’s blog.


14 Comments Add yours

  1. Carol anne says:

    U2 have the best music and lyrics!


    1. msjadeli says:

      Yes they do! 🙂


  2. As I already commented on Dave’s site, if there’s one person I knew who could pull it off to create a poem from U2 lyrics, it’s you – great take on the subject!

    I’m primarily familiar with U2’s ’80s output and plan to take a closer look at “Achtung Baby”. I only know “One”, “The Fly” and “Mysterious Ways”.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Christian, glad you enjoyed my approach to the prompt. Oh yes, you definitely need to get familiar with “Achtung Baby” and also “The Joshua Tree.” I also LOVE “All that you Can’t Leave Behind.” It has so many beautiful songs on it. “Grace” is one of my favorites on it.

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      1. “The Joshua Tree” is my favorite U2 album. From “All You Can Left Behind”, I know the four singles “Beautiful Day”, “Stuck In a Moment You Can’t Get Out of”, “Elevation” and “Walk On”. I’m going to check out “Grace” and the rest of the album as well! 🙂

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        1. msjadeli says:

          I’ll try to remember that one is your favorite and let me know what you think about “Grace” 🙂

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  3. memadtwo says:

    That’s quite a project! I like the second stanza particularly. I also admire how you can hone in on things. I can never deal with “favorites” of anything. (K)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, K. This was an impossible task, of choosing one song’s favorite lyrics, but I did get to cover the whole album which was easier, but still…

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      1. memadtwo says:

        You are much more focused than I am. I can’t even seem to make and follow a list anymore…

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  4. randydafoe says:

    Extremely creative approach!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much, Randy.


  5. Badfinger (Max) says:

    After reading this the other day I spent a lot of time listening to the album in Atlanta…

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Very cool, Max. It’s a real gem, isn’t it. So much lush and emotion in it.

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      1. Badfinger (Max) says:

        Yes it is and it takes me back to when I bought it.

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