
Datura, pale, mute blossom, listens in
the cold, dark purple night, as the moon
stays a lost prisoner in towered clouds.
She eschews silence; instead yearns
for dreamed notes in her stone cavern:
lost music’s echoed strains of moaned
liquid silk and vermillion-scented sins.
2nd on for Linda’s dVerse prompt of “music” for a quadrille
‘Vermillion scented sins’- I wish I had written that! Beautiful, Lisa.
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❤ Thanks!
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You’re welcome!
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Mysterious and dreamy. Like Linda, I love that line too.
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Thank you, Grace 🙂
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Your words add richness to this piece. Thank you for sharing this.
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K, thank you and glad you think so.
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I did not know datura was another name for jimson weed…now I have to go look for mine in Riverside Park, to see if it has returned this year yet. The blossoms are elusive though. (K)
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They probably hide during the day. I bet if you go out there at night you’ll see them.
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I’ve seen them blooming, but it’s a short window of opportunity. You have to be there on just the right day. But I imagine they would be magic with the moon shining on them.
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An interesting post, Lisa. Love the music!
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Thank you, Dwight. Yes, that music is compelling and beautiful.
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Thanks Lisa… It always takes me back!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This is so beautiful Li.
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I wish I had written this, Lisa ❤
~David
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Thanks much, David ❤
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“Dreamed notes in her stone cavern”. I really love that line Lisa. I also really like that Suspended Meditation piece by Elizabeth Turk! That art piece is truly beautiful.🙂✌🏼❣️
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Two stars for Lisa! 🙂 Seven great poetic lines.
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There is so much to learn from Botany. Love what you wrote.
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Bjorn, thank you. Indeed!
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Beautiful music goes so well with your quadrille >3
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Thank you, this is one of my current favorite classical music.
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The words are kinda like being in a dream.
I love the music
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Thanks for sharing what you see in it. That music is compelling for sure.
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Wonderful! It’s nice reading someone else’s response to the q170 challenge. ❤️
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh my goodness… this is so good. I love every word you wrote!
Wow, just WOW!
“She eschews silence; instead yearns
for dreamed notes in her stone cavern:
lost music’s echoed strains of moaned
liquid silk and vermillion-scented sins.”
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❤ Thank you!
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Super
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Thank you.
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