PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
Oops
Why here? Isn’t her clemency enough?
She steps from a gold-plated Hummer, garbed in royal blue Versace and Wang glitter pumps. Two escorts in Armani walk her over.
She’s usually wearing a doll grin. Today she looks almost scared; her wrinkles are tight.
We’re seated in the tent bistro, out of drone view. The goons stand nearby, their sunglasses ever-oscillating.
Jowls raised in a smirk, I scratch the bruise on my hand. “OK, G, what the …?”
“You raped the wrong girl. You will go with them … and answer their questions.”
I reach for my phone.
“I wouldn’t,” G hisses.
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Tao Talk 
G doesn’t seem to be messing. He’s in trouble
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I have read this a few times and am still a tad confused on who is who in this one…
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There is the person waiting for G. G arrives with 2 escorts. The person wants to know why they are meeting up like this (implied it’s not the usual circumstances.)
Does that help?
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I think the difficulty is the switche from third person to first so we don’t understand who is who…
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I’m not exactly sure what’s going on, but I don’t think I like G very much.
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What about the person who raped the wrong girl? They are both thoroughly reprehensible.
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Of course that’s true, but I’m not really sure who the rapist is!
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Sorry, Li. I’m just trying to understand.
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Things look ominous. (K)
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