Poetry –manifestation




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A thumping, a glumping, a bumping is heard

I turn and there’s nothing, I swear.

It’s darkening, fear’s hearkening.

Then suddenly, a dank chill fills the air.

Shawl pulled closer, mood grows moroser,

Sparks prickle the ends of my hair.

Mood’s getting intense, I light the incense.

Oh dear, what’s that shape over there.

My eyes attestation, skull’s manifestation

As its eyes glow, it floats near the chair.



Word of the day challenge — manifestation


19 Comments Add yours

  1. Dawn D says:

    Nicely done! You bring the idea of the surreal really well in this piece!

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  2. theusedlife says:

    So much fun. I love it! 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 it was fun to write and the gif i found fit it well

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  3. Fantastic rhyming. I really loved that. It made me laugh. I didn’t want it to end. Keep writing, it’s too good to leave it there. 🙂

    Oh and I love the word ‘glumping’, not come across it before but it’s great.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      lol I felt the same about it being unfinished. maybe more installments until halloween? thanks for the encouragement. about glumping — not even sure it’s a word but it fit the space 😉

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      1. It’s a word now, I think it’s a great one. No pressure, it’s a great poem as it is, but if you do feel like adding to it, that would be great too. 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you! Happy Halloween!


  4. Gina says:

    Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
    Come read Kristian’s pick for Pay it Forward this week

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks Gina and please thank Kristian!

      Liked by 1 person

  5. This is such fun and so fantastic!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      glad you like it!

      Liked by 1 person

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