dVerse — Quadrille — spring dreams

This mix of purple, white and yellow Crocus will pop up in early spring  through the snow. Tough yet cheerful, when this… | Crocus bulbs, Crocus  flower, Bulb flowers

swift as wind currents
whirl round the trees
warm as the sunshine
brings hums of bees
sprite as ice waters
can dance down creek
spring sings bird songs
life stirs from sleep
blossoms of the crocus
yellow purple white preens
appetize restful waking dreams

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Sarah is today’s host for dVerse‘ Quadrille Monday. Sarah says:
A quadrille is a poem of 44 words, including the prompt word, or a variation of that prompt word. And the word I’ve chosen tonight is “swift”. Write a poem – and please link it back to this post. That increases our readership – and yours!  Link your poem into Mr Linky  Take flight among the poems of the dVerse poets – read, comment, enjoy!

 

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  1. I know that spring is coming, but we still have winter once again…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Oh no, Bjorn :( It’s stayed sunny here and most days “warm” enough to walk to the mailbox without a coat. Hoping it clears for you soon.

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    Lovely use of similes, Lisa, in your spring-fresh quadrille!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kim, thank you! Spring-fresh yes!

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    2. Lovely Lisa! A poem of new beginnings 🙂💕

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      1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

        Yes! I sure hope so! The Winter of Covid is coming to an end <3

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  3. I love the revamp of your blog! This poem has the scent of spring about it, the very essence. So hopeful.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sarah, thank you on both counts. Your prompt pulled me into spring, thank you <3

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  4. Ingrid's avatar Ingrid says:

    This feels like a condensed sonnet to me, Lisa, full of the freshness of spring! I love the rhyme scheme and the lightness of it :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Many thanks, Ingrid, I tried to keep it light to go along with the sunshine and the swifts :)

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  5. Spring feels so close I can practically taste it. I do like the image of currents at the start of your quadrille, it made me think of the movement in murmurations of sparrows, the way they move across the sky in waves and ripples.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Many thanks, Carol. Glad it made you think of them.

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  6. Perfection! So lovely! And the photo!!! Wow together! :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Na’ama! :)

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  7. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

    A lovely poem of spring. And I love the flowers on your page, too.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Merril, glad you do!

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  8. rog's avatar rogblog666 says:

    hurry up spring you just took a step towards it thank you

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rog, happy to oblige. Thank you.

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  9. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Your poem ,as beautiful as the flowers.
    Happy Monday

    Much💜love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Gillena thank you! Can’t wait til they are here.

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    2. Beautifully written! I look forward to the warm sunshine bringing hums of bees🙂

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      1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

        Thank you. If it keeps on warming up here it won’t be long.

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        1. We didn’t really get any snow this winter, but it has rained constantly. Some sun to dry everything up would be great.

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  10. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford says:

    A joyous Spring poem. We’re enjoying some Spring-like weather, but fearing Winter may have one last blast in store for us.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glad you enjoyed the poem, Beverly, and I hope Winter changes its mind for your area.

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  11. Ron.'s avatar Ron. says:

    We’re still looking forward to the warmer weather up here, so I’m very grateful for your appetizing preview here, Lisa. And the New blogblooms are exquisite. Thanks!

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  12. Spring can’t come swiftly enough!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      What’s it like your way?

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      1. sunny & 70 today, 75 tomorrow, then back to the 50s and rain, so I guess you could say our spring is here

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Sunny and 70! Yippee! Hey I wanted to give you an update on that heron pic I want to make a collage out of. Now that I have a new (it’s an old one my younger son had laying around) printer and scanner I was able to print out a greyscale image of it :)

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  13. calmkate's avatar calmkate says:

    this is such a joyful melodic pleasurable embrace, love it!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kate, thanks much, glad you enjoyed it :)

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      1. calmkate's avatar calmkate says:

        totally, like a breath of fresh air thanks Lisa!

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  14. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    spring sings bird songs
    life stirs from sleep

    Beautiful and the harp music is gorgeous!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Dwight. I love Loreena’s music and singing, even though she doesn’t sing in this one.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome. The harp is such a unique instrument!

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  15. Lovely poem. Let’s hope spring comes early and stays awhile

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      YES! And… I got great news today. Anyone over 50 can get the vaccine in MI starting 3/22, so by summer I will be a free bird!

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  16. marialberg's avatar marialberg says:

    This is NICE. I like how you use sprite and appetize.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much. I tried to keep the verbs on the left and the “ee”s on the right :)

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  17. wow, this is so good, Lisa… and those long e’s of yours… just lovely.

    -David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Many thanks, David. I enjoyed putting it together.

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  18. lynn__'s avatar lynn__ says:

    Your blog and poem have a fresh appeal…spring is in the air, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      There’s nothing like crocus in snow to breathe fresh air into things :)

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  19. Lovely Lisa! A poem of new beginnings ☺️💕

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  20. Ali Grimshaw's avatar Ali Grimshaw says:

    I liked the cheerful rhythm of this.
    The crisp of coolness with bright colors poking through.

    It makes me excited for the flowers to come.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Ali. I’m looking forward to them as well.

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  21. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A beautiful spring vista!

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome 😊

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  22. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 (Max) says:

    What a contrast that picture is…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Isn’t it amazing that the flowers can push through the snow and bloom? An everyday miracle :)

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 (Max) says:

        Yes it is…that picture says a lot on it’s own.

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  23. That’s lovely. I feel the emergence of spring.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I’m glad you do, GiN, thank you.

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  24. I love a delightful spring poem, and yours is just lovely Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Linda :)

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  25. Xan's avatar Xan says:

    A wonderful invocation for spring.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Alexandra! I know things are warmer over your way aren’t they? I bet you get crocus there before we do.

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      1. Xan's avatar Xan says:

        Oh, they got warm, and now they’re cold again. We had some snow, which we’ll keep getting through April. Spring requires blind optimism in Chicago.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Same here with the cold. Sure hope snow doesn’t continue through April :(

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  26. I can feel the magic of spring rearing it’s head. It does seem to happen all at once! 🌼🌻🌺🌹🌼

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  27. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    “Life stirs from sleep”. I like the circular rhythm to your words. (K)

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